Saturday, August 8, 2009

The Promise Of Azoth: [Book I] Dark Elvin

Azoth The Promise of:

DARK ELVIN: PROLOGUE

They came from far away and we welcomed them in peace. Through the void of space they piloted their ship until they found us. How it happened, I still don’t know. There were only seven of them, and I underestimated how much they could do with so few of their race. It is true that they recruited many of our people to help them, and we gladly gave our time and resources to build the gate. And then it was done, and they said their farewells and returned in their ship to sail back to their own world. They had told us one thing to do and that we did. We waited.

Many years passed before we saw the green crystal on the gate’s control panel begin to glow. All we had to do they said, was key in a sequence of numbers which they had left with us, and the gates would be open between worlds. It was all very simple, really. Many of my people were excited at the prospect of what the gate offered: a chance to see another world. I was not so sure. We did not really know these beings all that well; and though their machines were wondrus, they were so very alien to us.

And so a council was called and I voted to hold off for awhile, but I was only a small voice is a great sea of voices that were eager to see what was on the other side of that gate. I felt heavy in my heart, and prepared myself for the unknown. It was the first time I had ever experienced such unsurety, and for me it was end of everything I had ever been.

Against some of our protests they opened the gate between worlds and many of us were forced through. There was no consultation, no choice to be made and we could not reverse the damage that had been done. You see, when that Tel Door was opened, both worlds were thrown out of balance: but not right away. Ours was a world of magik; while this other world, this terra-Earth, was a world of machines. We were met by “men of peace” as they called themselves, descendents of the ones who had come to our world in that strange ship. With their help we built many doors, because unknown to us the magik of my world was creating a new balance between the worlds of KaLaraen and terra-Earth, and it laid the wundaeri [the compulsion] on us.

My race built our own door (as many others did) matched by doors on the other side, for many came through from that other world, as compelled as we were. But we did not choose who went through the gates, it was the magik that chose, the very essence of KaLaraen, and it divided family and friends. When I walked through the gate into this world, this terra-Earth, something happened to me that I never before experienced. I got angry. Like the effects of the magik on this world it did not happen right away to be sure, and for awhile I made the best of my new home.

We called ourselves the Vanya: or strangers, but in the tongue of these people we were creatures of magik and they named us Elvin.

Friday, August 7, 2009

My Space Page and Azoth Books

Update: I closed down my MYSPACE page due to too much junk traffic. I will endeavour to
post more here, including the Dark Elvin novel I am working on. The Promise of Azoth is actually four stories [1] Dark Elvin. The story of Galen Brandis birth... indirectly. This story is about half done. [2] Shadow Of The Dragon. The story of Galen Brandis and Cyrstasia Leah Dornay on their honeymoon and she is abducted by Grindael the Dragon. This novel is finished. [3] Shadow of the Darkstar [3] Set about 100 years after Shadow of the Dragon. Fear not: Galen is a Kimaani Wizard and is still around. There is trouble from the KeshLord Korehor in the Kingdom of Argos, and this is about the rise of the Darkesh Kokesh, Korehor the Keshlord's three "Dark Stars" who help him carry out his evil plans... This story is almost done. [4] Shadow of the Sorcerer-King. This is the story of the rise of the third of the Darkesh: Kumion (Kuminkesh). This story is about half done. The third of the Darkesh... The Teclord Algoth, goes back before Galen was born and has not been written yet, though there is a detailed timeline of his activities. He is now Alkesh, the leader of the Darkesh. The Promise of Azoth takes place 500 years before the Sword of Azoth Trilogy, which is in a big disarray right now. This is the story that Reign put to a rock opera in the 90's, (many thanks to Dave Kubler) Due to an unfortunate happenstance in 2007, all the manuscripts, maps, songs and lyrics were lost in this trilogy. I have recreated a lot, but not all of it. I had completed the Call Of Azoth (The Journey to Kaladon), The Quest For Azoth (The Gathering Storm) [I know Brandon Sanderson is using this title now for the first book of Memory of Light, but I thought of it first - ask Dave) and the third novel was the Flame of Azoth (The Light that Shines) and this was about half done. To recreate these novels has been an enourmous task for me and I have written the outlines again, but not the bulk of the novels. I will be going with the Promise of Azoth first, and then moving on to the Sword of Azoth Trilogy. There are tree novels planned after the Sword Trilogy is finished. I will post the first chapter of Dark Elvin Tomorrow. Hope you all like it. Thanks
grindael-san

Tuesday, May 5, 2009

blizzard

Hello all. In addition to working on "The Promise of Azoth," I recently started another story called Blizzard. It takes place in North Dakota, and is about a family (of three) who go to see a sick relative and get caught in a blizzard. In the middle of this, they stop to help some men in distress who turn out to be robbers who have just pulled a Casino Job in nearby Devil's Lake. The crooks car was damaged and they have run out of gas from a bullet hole in the gas tank. This is a real change for me, and as you see I've already done some story art and have pretty much the entire book worked out. I'm shooting for a novel, instead of novella's like I've written in the past. The Promise of Azoth is actually four novellas that take place about 100 years apart. But it tells the essential story of Galen Brandis, where he comes from and how the Sword of Azoth was made and what shaped him as a character, and why he is how he is in the great war that takes place in his future...
Due to some personal problems, I have done little writing in the past four years, and have lost most of my early manuscripts and maps. Some of my family let me down there, and destroyed most of my work. I am picking up the pieces though, and moving on. Galen Brandis will never die, and I will see his story published before I die. As to what else is in my head....there is a lot of stuff up there and I hope to share more with all of you in the future. Take
a look at SECRET VOICES, the short flash-fiction piece I wrote, and let me know what you think.... yvette loved it and wants me to add to it, but it is what it is...oh, the picture of grindael the dragon at the top of the blogofazoth is unfinished...i'm working on it...
-grindael-san


Sunday, May 3, 2009

new blogofazoth post

New blogofazoth post! Coming soon...excerpts from Dark Elvin
from the forthcoming Novel: The Promise Of Azoth. Enjoy the
short story The Secret Voices.....

grindael-san

The Secret Voices

Here is a short story I wrote recently.... hope ya like it:

The Secret Voices

Greta wasn’t sure what to do next. Her lungs were on fire and she felt as if she had a large rock chained around her neck. There were other things wrong, but she was afraid to look. Fearfully she glanced around, desperation changing her beautiful face into a mask of anguish. She breathed a ragged sigh of relief as she noted that there was no one following her. She had to sit down. Just for a moment. Even if all the hosts of hell were after her she just had to sit down. But she couldn’t.

Taking note of her bearings, she saw that she was now about four miles north of where this whole mess had started. Good. Only half a block to go and she would be able to rest. She found herself mouthing the words “oh please, oh please, oh please” in agonized whispers that came out of her like the fervent prayer of a dying man. Each step was becoming a frantic fight to keep moving. To stop here would be the end of her, and that thought kept her moving.
She crossed Bailey and stumbled over the curb on the other side of the street as she closed the remaining distance to the destination she had struggled to reach. It wasn’t the ideal place to go, but it would get her off the street and she could sit down. Perhaps there she would be able to formulate some kind of thought to explain all of this. Explain what just couldn’t be true. Explain what had happened to her and why she hadn’t seen it coming.

As she stood in front of the red brick house with the yellow door it all came back in a jumbled mass of images and thoughts. She wanted to tilt her head back and howl in torment, but she was frozen with fear. What if they knew? What if they were expecting her to come here? Her legs wobbled under her as a wave of nausea and physical pain washed over her.
Then she heard the sirens. She was trapped! What should she do? How could this have happened? She whipped her head around and stared back at the way she had come. She only had moments now, moments until they reached a place where they could see her. The screeching of the sirens disturbed her though, made it hard to think. She turned towards the house and walked up to the door. Her trembling hand just couldn’t grasp the knob. What if they knew? What if they knew?

It had all started with a thought. Not her thought. Oh no. But that thought was persistent, and she found herself listening to it again and again. Then it was joined by another, and another. Whispering. Like they had a secret. How these voices were coming into her head she did not know, but they were coming from outside of herself and they were not pleasant. It always happened at her job, and more and more these thoughts intruded into her brain with their planning and scheming and violence. She began to be very afraid, and took some time off of work to get away from them. But when she went back to her job the voices were there, a plethora of them now that got inside her head and twisted her brain into knots of horror at what they were thinking.

And then they had heard her. It wasn’t as if they spoke directly to her, but they began discussing among themselves “the outsider”. She knew they had detected her somehow, even though she had never made herself known to them. She began looking at people differently. Could her fellow workers be involved? Where were these thoughts coming from, and why could she hear them? Was anyone else listening? Were they as scared as she was? Was she going crazy? Then the secret voices mentioned the building where she worked and she knew they knew who she was. She ran. And felt them following her.

Now she was at the yellow door, the sirens screaming as they closed in on her. She hesitated again, and to her amazement the sirens went right by her. Four black R.V’s sped by in a rush to somewhere, but not here. Not here! She turned back to the yellow door, her hand shaking now in relief as she opened it and stepped into her house.

They were waiting.

Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Artwork...

Hey all!
I put up some of Duncan Longs Art to go with
my poetry, and He contacted me about permissions...
so UNFORTUNATELY I had to take it down.
Not to worry, I HAPPEN to be a pretty good
artist, and his art has given me some ideas about
how to illustrate these ballads....
But if you want to see some REALLY COOL
art, go to his site, www.duncanlong.com and
browse around. When I do get Dreamsongs
published, perhaps I will have him illustrate it,
I feel like he got in my head and did the art that
goes with those songs tho...
Anyway, I've got more stuff comin, this site
is getting visited more and more, and some have
asked to advertise on it.... so maybe there will
be some income to afford Duncan Long. Till
then, go to his website, and keep coming back
here for updates on Dreamsongs.....

Monday, November 24, 2008

GRINDAEL


Here she is...
To read the first chapter of
the Novel "Shadow Of The Dragon"
go to my MySpace Page....